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About Me Member Wannabe Poet critical-conditionFemale/United Kingdom Recent Activity Deviant for 3 Years
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The great escape

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forbidden loveThe world begins when he is near  His beauty brings light to all  His smile makes the sky seem so clear  And birds answer to his call.   
If we could only be as one  And defy nature’s law  We can never be undone  Love so sweet, so sour, so raw  
 
I am no star, no dazzling light  Yet his touch warms my heart  So I brighten the sky every night  Praying he will not depart   
For I am the moon and he is the sun  And we can never be together  He is the day, and I am the night  But our love will last forever. forbidden love
by ~critical-condition
Crypticcryptic  crossword puzzle number eighthundredandseventysix  next to  sudoku   
clue?      it looks to be easy  as you have all the facts  in black  
and  white.   
nine across:  digression  thought i loved you  looked over at you in  
that exam  and loved the back of your head.  whell.  sadly, my dear, the back of your head is not part  of your heart  and now  i am not even going to waste my words on you.   
oxygen theif.   
no doubt ill miss you  and you cant spell  ill feel ill just think Cryptic
by ~critical-condition
Food chainMan  Walks into a café  Holds open the door for   
Woman  Leaves the café  Crosses the road and is avoided by   
Jeep  Hurries to destination  Drives fast through a puddle and splashes   
Teenager  Walking back home  Opens the door and  
 
Brother  
Leaves the house  Drives to the pub and meets   
Friend  Talks and talks and talks  Buys another round from the  
 
Barman  Counts change  Leaves for home and meets   
Mother in law  Goes to the shop  Buys flowers for  
 
Neighbou Food chain
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Pro crastinationI'd like to think  I know.   
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oh-oh-ohhh  knitting is the new nu  -rave  is there a word for that?  over-use of hyphens  accessorising my work thats it making it look pretty  doesn't scan without it.   
I consider myself  pro crastination.  If it's crastinate, I'm for it.  On the border of Procrasti -   - nation.  Nation.  That's it.   
See what I did there?  Took me a while to think that one up.  Don't be silly, it's not a waste of my time,  there's always more time to come  'time cannot be wasted', as Granny Pro crastination
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G.O.S.H.

Sat Aug 2, 2008, 1:22 PM
...I feel lonely.
This always happens.


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love to all

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  • Mood: Lonely
  • Listening to: your song - elton john (",)

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  • Interests: tea cosies, lighthouses
  • Favourite band or musician: nirvana, led zeppelin
  • Favourite genre of music: folk rock floats my boat
  • Favourite artist: Edvard Munch, Wassily Kandinsky
  • Favourite poet or writer: George Orwell, Douglas Adams
  • Favourite style of art: anything with emotion
  • Favourite cartoon character: snoopy

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:iconlyriclollys:
~lyriclollys Feb 4, 2009, 12:22:55 PM
hey, how are you?

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*ghost28 Jul 20, 2008, 5:06:54 AM
thanks for the fave =p

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~Hybrid-Hawk Jul 15, 2008, 5:08:50 PM
guess who :P

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~critical-condition Jul 19, 2008, 10:16:55 AM
O:
It's you!
:D

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be yourself
everyone else is already taken.
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=sweet-lovely-death Jul 10, 2008, 1:37:44 AM
whoo hoo...nice gallery :D

check this out [link]

say you think :D :heart:

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~fokuz Jul 1, 2008, 9:20:57 AM
nice words : ) I'm not really into prose or poetry tbh but i liked the bits i read. Have you heard of john stammers? ....the book of poems i read by him opened my mind to the medium quite a bit, worth recommending ' panoramic lounge bar' and 'stolen love behaviour'

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~critical-condition Jul 2, 2008, 6:28:39 AM
(: I'm glad you liked them.
I can't say I have heard of him, but I'll check him out. Thanks! :D

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be yourself
everyone else is already taken.
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=deadlyMETAL Jun 23, 2008, 5:00:40 PM
Hey!! I wrote my own composition of Food Chain, [link] . It's longer and not structured very friendly for the eyes, but it's all in there! It might take a little while to read, but I hope it's good!!

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~critical-condition Jun 27, 2008, 2:38:44 AM
(: Yeah, I checked it out! Great work!!

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be yourself
everyone else is already taken.
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=deadlyMETAL Jun 27, 2008, 1:53:31 PM
Thanks!! :hug::hug::hug:

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